The First 3 Pages - Update Part 5

It's a few weeks since my last update and we've been hard at work turning the finished story into illustrations.  Over the past few weeks the amazing people who have signed up to help tell this story have been voting on some great new things to add to the book (I'd love for you to be on the list, you can sign up below).

And the results are:

First 3 Pages

And here are the first 3 pages of the book.  I'm still playing around with the background and the text  (especially with it being hand written, I might have to get my wife to hand written is pretty bad).  

Now if you like what you see and want to get involved with helping me tell the story then you can sign up at the bottom of this post.  Each week I'll send a new survey straight to your inbox and you get decide what happens next!